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Description
love does
the timing seems on
in all things
why not the heart
the timing seems on
in all things
why not the heart
Image size
2448x3264px 2.97 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon PowerShot S5 IS
Shutter Speed
1/79 second
Aperture
F/2.7
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Aug 17, 2009, 2:39:41 AM
Comments17
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Technique
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This is an interesting piece to want to be critiqued. When I opened it up full size, I thought, "What will I say about this? I've never had to critique anything that looks like this before."
But then I read the artist's comments.
You know how some people leave them blank? I dislike that - some people go in to lengthy detail about the how's and why's.
You, you took a picture of some scissors and left a thoughtful, deep, somewhat meaningful '<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Wink/Razz" />oem' in yours.
It left the subject matter up for interpretation, even if those words didn't MEAN anything in accordance to the photograph, or to you, or in general, it gave a wide opening to interpret the picture in another light, even if it is 'just a pair of scissors'.
Technically, this picture could be better - the focus could be a little less 'on' so it would be less grainy away from the focal point, but overall, since it's an interesting angle and subject matter, it doesn't show up too bad.
I like the colors, they are interesting. I don't know if you deliberately picked them for this shot, but if you did, kudos, and if you didn't, kudos anyway. I really like how you can tell these scissors are old and perhaps rusty - the dust on the focal point is visible, very - makes it more interesting.
I enjoy that there isn't any distraction in the background, making it so you're pretty much forced to look at the scissors. Since I had nothing else to look at, I realized that if you look closely, it doesn't just look like a face, it looks like a heart from the handles and down, if you include the negative space in the background.
Overall, this was a thrill to write a critique for, though I can offer no pointers as such, it was nice to see something I've never seen before, and for that, I must thank YOU <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />